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Gutter Space #10: Narration in Alison Bechdel’s Fun Home

09 Wednesday Oct 2013

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Gutter Space #10 by Leslie Salas

Narration in Alison Bechdel’s Fun Home

Fun Home

 Many of the graphic novels that I’ve talked about so far on Gutter Space are missing something that Alison Bechdel’s Fun Home: A Family Tragicomic, excels in: narration. And not just normal narration in captions—heavy narration. Narration that accompanies nearly every single panel.

Bechdel’s choice makes sense with her storytelling style. Since her graphic novels (plural because I’m including Are You My Mother? in this, even though I haven’t reviewed it yet) are memoirs, the juxtaposition of the narration and the images in the panels allows for an interesting visual presentation of what many non-fiction writers refer to as the “double-I”—the writer behind the desk thinking retrospectively while also striving to be true to his or herself at the time of the event.


Most simply put, Fun Home is the story of Bechdel’s coming-of-age as a young lesbian along with her discovery that her father was also queer. Combine this journey of self-discovery with the news of her father’s sudden death, and there’s a lot of room for Bechdel to think and reminisce and try to make sense of that particular time in her life.

This need to stop, think, and reevaluate lends itself well to the comics format—especially one with a great deal of narration. One can focus on a particular image or scene while exploring multiple narrative threads. The image itself keeps the musing together, while the captioning of the words allows the thoughts to exist as their own discrete entities. By playing with the placement of the captions on the page, one can affect the pacing of the story and the speed in which one’s readers traverse through the text.

Fun Home reads like literary nonfiction, but offers what prose alone cannot: the ability to engage a reader subconsciously not only through the power and meaning behind words, but by conveying the reality of the writer/artist through her sequential art—her own artistic representation of her life.

We live in an increasingly visually-saturated world, and the graphic memoir feeds into our innate abilities to make sense of pictures put together. Bechdel goes one step further with her overarching narrative, guiding us through her thoughts, but also showing us what she saw and letting us judge her situations on our own.

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Leslie Salas (Photo by Ashley Inguanta)

Leslie Salas writes fiction, nonfiction, screenplays, and comics. She earned her MFA in Creative Writing from the University of Central Florida and attended the University of Denver Publishing Institute. In addition to being an Associate Course Director at Full Sail University, Leslie also serves as an assistant editor for The Florida Review, a graphic nonfiction editorial assistant for Sweet: A Literary Confection, and a regular contributing artist for SmokeLong Quarterly.

Gutter Space #9: Flashbacks in Will Eisner’s A Family Matter

02 Wednesday Oct 2013

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Gutter Space #9 by Leslie Salas

Flashbacks in Will Eisner’s A Family Matter

We’re going a little bit old school this week by taking a look a cartooning legend Will Eisner’s A Family Matter.

Before we jump in, I’m going to take a moment to be honest. As you can see by my previous Gutter Space posts, I mostly focus on contemporary (and rather mainstream) American independent comics and webcomics (that aren’t superhero comics—that’s Sean Ironman’s domain). But besides reading the classic American funnies in the newspaper, I wasn’t really exposed to American comics until more recently. I got interested in sequential art by reading Japanese manga. (We can get more into whether or not my obsession with manga may or may not have started with my obsession with Sailor Moon at a later time. See Mark Pursell’s post for a similar sentiment.)

I bring this up because A Family Matter is the first Eisner graphic novel I’ve ever read. And because of the heavy contemporary manga influence in my background, my approach to understanding his sequential art comes from more of an outsider’s perspective.

Over the span of 72 pages, Eisner covers a 24-hour period in what seems like a normal family’s life. We readers get to know each of the family members in the present as they make their way to their father’s 90th birthday party. But we also get snippets of each of the family members’ troubled past with their father and each other through flashbacks. The placement and braiding of these scenes further informs the particular nuances of this family’s dysfunction.

These flashbacks often are presented side-by-side with present action, offering contrast and introspection to the interactions between the family members. The flashbacks are drawn with what seems like a wispy hand, less detailed than the present, with fuzzy shading around them, functioning similarly to thought bubbles. The result is a punchy, immersive storyline that fully engages the reader in the conflict of past and present influencing the future.

A Family Matter is a quick read that exhibits technical mastery in many areas. Boldly inked with soft grey watercolor shading, the art itself is typical of American cartooning in the late 90s. There’s some great work going on here, especially with narrative braiding, but I’m still not sure how I feel about the story as a whole.

Yes, the story is rich with details and provides a thought-provoking ending. There are no captions at all in the comic (except for an epigraph at the very beginning), so the story is driven entirely by drawings and dialogue. The work undoubtedly showcases Eisner as a master of the form, but I still feel like something’s missing—or maybe that it’s trying too hard.

The story itself lacks the complex sophistication of many contemporary graphic novels. It really just feels like a collection of dysfunctional-family clichés. A daughter catches her father with a strumpet and becomes the favorite after she promises to keep his secret. The oldest son becomes an outcast because he refuses to follow in his father’s footsteps. A woman sleeps with her sister’s husband. Everyone has daddy issues, and sucks up to Dad in the hopes that they’ll get a cut of his substantial inheritance. And so on. We’ve heard these stories before.

I’m not sure it is fair to draw this kind of parallel given that Eisner was on the forefront of establishing comics as a long-form medium for storytelling. He practically invented the graphic novel, so of course the medium itself will undergo substantial changes in just a few decades. Were these themes as prevalent in literature in 1998? Probably. But what about in comics? Maybe. But maybe not presented in this manner. And maybe it’s just my MFA talking, being snooty about storytelling quality and what may or may not be considered fresh and literary.

Either way, there are definitely great things to learn from A Family Matter, and I’d certainly suggest it as a good short read. Check it out and let me know what you think?

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Leslie Salas (Photo by Ashley Inguanta)

Leslie Salas writes fiction, nonfiction, screenplays, and comics. She earned her MFA in Creative Writing from the University of Central Florida and attended the University of Denver Publishing Institute. In addition to being an Associate Course Director at Full Sail University, Leslie also serves as an assistant editor for The Florida Review, a graphic nonfiction editorial assistant for Sweet: A Literary Confection, and a regular contributing artist for SmokeLong Quarterly.

Gutter Space #7: Hybrid Comics and Prose

18 Wednesday Sep 2013

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Allie Brosh, Comics, gutter space, Hybrid forms, Hyperbole and a Half, Illustrations, leslie salas, Nonfiction, Prose, The God of Cake

Gutter Space by Leslie Salas

Comics and Prose: Allie Brosh’s Hyperbole and a Half

Hyperbole and a Half is one of my favorite things on the Internet. Written and illustrated by Allie Brosh, this site mostly comprises of personal essays presented as a combination of standard prose (typed out sentences) and child-like MS Paint drawings.

As the title of her blog implies, the narrative style is often hyperbolic in nature. Brosh’s art style is deliberate. Her illustrations are essential to her storytelling—without them, most of the meaning (and humor!) of her essays would be lost. The drawings, carefully constructed to convey her hyperbolic tone, leads the reader to believe and understand what might otherwise be misunderstood as clearly false or ridiculous.

For instance, let’s take a look at her essay, “The God of Cake.”

In this essay, Brosh talks about an incident that happened when she was four years old, involving a decadent cake her mother made for her grandfather.

As you can see, the illustration is a combination of simplistic images and complex ones. The girl in pink (4-year-old Allie) and the woman in orange (her mother), don’t have a lot to them. Their arms are sticks, they don’t even have hands or noses. But small details like the color they wear and their hair style make these characters easily identifiable throughout the blog. The facial expressions are very detailed and clear. Mother is chastising the daughter. Daughter is enjoying cake.

And look at the detail on the cake!

That’s a marshmallow giraffe and elephant on top! Definitely a specific cake. And since the cake is the object of the protagonist’s obsession, that’s why there’s a great deal of detail involved in the illustration and presentation of the cake.

Because she had tasted the cake earlier, sugared-up 4-year-old Allie’s mission for the rest of the day was to try and eat the cake.

Brosh uses techniques such as repetition and blurring (alone or in sequence) to represent the hyperactive state of her 4-year-old self.

In stark contrast, the prose sections provide an adult’s retrospective account of the details. Brosh says: “I had tasted cake and there was no going back. My tiny body had morphed into a writhing mass of pure tenacity encased in a layer of desperation. I would eat all of the cake or I would evaporate from the sheer power of my desire to eat it.“

The balance between capturing the child’s voice and perspective as well as knowledge and wisdom of the writer-at-the-desk is a mastery of the “double-I” in nonfiction. The self as the character on the page, coupled with the self as the writing narrator, looking back on the event at a point later in time.

By combining both the prosaic narrative form with carefully crafted illustrations into a hybrid mode of storytelling, Brosh’s illustrated essays are engaging, introspective, and—quite frankly—hilarious.

Brosh’s first book, Hyperbole and a Half: Unfortunate Situations, Flawed Coping Mechanisms, Mayhem, and Other Things That Happened, should be available by the end of October. It will feature 50% new content—and will become one of my new favorite things on my bookshelf. Hopefully yours, as well.

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Leslie Salas (Photo by Ashley Inguanta)

Leslie Salas writes fiction, nonfiction, screenplays, and comics. She earned her MFA in Creative Writing from the University of Central Florida and attended the University of Denver Publishing Institute. In addition to being an Associate Course Director at Full Sail University, Leslie also serves as an assistant editor for The Florida Review, a graphic nonfiction editorial assistant for Sweet: A Literary Confection, and a regular contributing artist for SmokeLong Quarterly.

Gutter Space #6: Art Spiegelman’s Maus

11 Wednesday Sep 2013

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Gutter Space #6 by Leslie Salas

The Mice Behind the Masks: Art Spiegelman’s Maus

Art Spiegelman’s Maus is a framed narrative graphic novel in which the relationship between the author, Artie, and his father, Vladek, is exposed and intertwined with the author’s attempt to capture and relate his father’s experience as a persecuted Jew during the Holocaust.  The major conflicts explored in the outer frame of the novel involve the Artie’s contemporary struggle to understand his father’s stereotypical pragmatism as well as the Artie getting stuck in the middle of the bickering between his father and his step-mother, Mala.

 

The inner story, taking place in Poland just before and during World War II, mainly surrounds the Nazi invasion and occupation of Poland as experienced by Vladek in his roles as a soldier, husband, father, and son. Throughout Spiegelman’s Maus, the importance of prayer is noted and the mother’s, Anja’s, mental instability recorded.  The definition of friendship, the value of wealth, and the importance of health are questioned. The sheer cruelty of the Nazis is exposed, and the reader is made to bear witness to the horrors Jews endured under Hitler’s regime.

The element of craft that I find central to the book lies in an aspect of the graphic storytelling: the representation of different races as different anthropomorphic animals.  Simply put: the Jews are mice, the Poles are pigs, the Nazis are cats, and the Americans are dogs.

These representations are heavy in symbolism and have multiple connotations.  At a basic level of understanding the hierarchical structure of animals, it makes sense that the Nazis are cats since cats hunt mice, and that the Americans should be dogs, since dogs chase cats.  But there is more than just that.  Cats are known as being cunning, clever, graceful, and swift.  They have a reputation for sass and vanity (the joke “Cats don’t have owners, they have staff,” comes to mind). Dogs are generally known for their unconditional love and loyalty.  Pigs are known for their intelligence, but can also connote dirt and scheming (Animal Farm, anyone?).   And mice?  Small, helpless.  I’m reminded of nursery rhyme, “Three Blind Mice.”

But it isn’t just what’s beneath the surface, it’s also how Spiegelman uses these anthropomorphic characters.  The animals make it easy for the reader to quickly distinguish race, regardless of the clothes they are wearing or who is who.

With visual storytelling, some will argue that it is best to keep all of the characters as stock-looking as possible, with less defining features, so that they become more relatable to the reader. Clothes, glasses, and cigarettes distinguish person from person, but without human characteristics like hair and specific bone structure, each of the characters is a blank slate where the reader is free to fill in details themselves and make the reading experience more personal.

If the reader has experienced a situation similar to this one, the lack of detail in the characters allows for a stronger connection between the reader and the work, because it is likely that the reader will put himself or herself in the character’s shoes, and the reader will relive that moment through the graphic novel.

If one contrasts this with Spiegelman’s comic within Maus, “Prisoner on the Hell Planet,” the characters are all drawn to look just like themselves.  This no longer becomes a general story that anyone can relive, but instead is a highly specific tale about Art, Vladek, and how they specifically dealt with Anja’s death.

Since Artie’s father’s story about his experience in the Holocaust is one of many, many, many sad stories, I find Spiegelman’s choice to keep faces general is powerful for readers, particularly if they had family members involved, or were involved themselves.

The ambiguity is also characteristic of the degradation of memory over time.  Coupled with the fact that the story is told by Spiegelman telling it through Vladek, there is no way it could be kept exactly correct.  Since the characters do not look like humans, this takes off a lot of the pressure to get everything exactly right.

What I find particularly clever is Spiegelman’s use of masks to illustrate deception of identity.  For instance, at one point, Vladek sneaks onto the train back to the Reich, the circular frame that bleeds into the next one clearly show’s Vladek’s deception—a pig mask, even the string and bow are visible on the back of his head, and the hat hides his ears!  It is only four frames later, when Vladek is hiding in the closet, that we see his mouse ears and him holding the mask very clearly, contemplating it.

This deception works highly effectively—not only for the characters in the novel, but also for the reader, for now the anthropomorphic characteristics are also signaled as real, identifying markers.  It adds a level of subtle depth and complexity to the story that I find fascinating.

Spiegelman’s combination of words from his father’s actual storytelling as well as their clever manifestation to the graphic media in a logical and essential format is simply brilliant.  Spiegelman’s art is at once simplistic and detailed, and Spiegelman’s use of a simple device like a mask is so impressive to me because it ends up being so crucial to the telling of the story.

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Leslie Salas (Photo by Ashley Inguanta)

Leslie Salas writes fiction, nonfiction, screenplays, and comics. She earned her MFA in Creative Writing from the University of Central Florida and attended the University of Denver Publishing Institute. In addition to being an Associate Course Director at Full Sail University, Leslie also serves as an assistant editor for The Florida Review, a graphic nonfiction editorial assistant for Sweet: A Literary Confection, and a regular contributing artist for SmokeLong Quarterly.

Gutter Space #5: Less is More in E Horne & J Comeau’s A Softer World

04 Wednesday Sep 2013

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Gutter Space #5 by Leslie Salas

 Less is More in E Horne & J Comeau’s A Softer World

A Softer World, written by Joey Comeau and photographed/designed by Emily Horne, is a webcomic that is “sometimes … sad or harsh … in the tradition of George Simenon’s ‘romans durs’ (or ‘hard novels’).” Each of these comics follows the same three-panel template, where variations of the same or similar photographs are used to compliment the simple typewritten captions. To highlight Horne & Comeau’s style in A Softer World, let’s take a closer look at comic 998.

The captions of this comic seem simple—a kind of light-hearted humorous jab at the current state of politics in the US. The tone of the photograph and the location of the captions in terms of line of sight subconsciously create gloomier connotations for the strip. The comic comprises of what seems to be one single photograph, divided into three panels, of the Thomas Jefferson Memorial at night.

The first panel is dark and foreboding with the columns shadowed by nearby trees. It is with the second panel that we recognize the memorial for what it is—the statue of Jefferson facing the previous panel, a small arch of light above him. A partial caption directly behind his head alludes that the personification of “government” may apply to the President, and the final panel, with the columns more brightly lit and the captions moving further down the square, present a relaxed sadness.

However, there’s more to this comic. By placing your mouse over the comic, you’ll get a bonus caption in the roll over text, adding an extra element of culpability to the unidentified narrator.

Like many of the other comics of A Softer World, comic 998 resembles the poetry equivalent for comics. Each of the words in the captions is specifically chosen to elicit a response from the reader; placement of the text in each panel is carefully considered to influence how the reader scans across the photographic images. The end result is a subtle and poignant critique of some element of society. 

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Leslie Salas (Photo by Ashley Inguanta)

Leslie Salas writes fiction, nonfiction, screenplays, and comics. She earned her MFA in Creative Writing from the University of Central Florida and attended the University of Denver Publishing Institute. In addition to being an Associate Course Director at Full Sail University, Leslie also serves as an assistant editor for The Florida Review, a graphic nonfiction editorial assistant for Sweet: A Literary Confection, and a regular contributing artist for SmokeLong Quarterly.

Gutter Space #4: Worldbuilding in Megan Kelso’s Artichoke Tales

28 Wednesday Aug 2013

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Artichoke Tales, coming-of-age, Fiction, Graphic Novel, gutter space, leslie salas, Megan Kelso, nudity, vulnerability, Worldbuilding

Gutter Space #4 by Leslie Salas

Worldbuilding in Megan Kelso’s Artichoke Tales

 Worldbuilding—whether in graphic novels or prose novels—is the long and arduous task of creating and enriching social, cultural, and economic setting of a narrative. Worldbuilding is done best when it is invisible to the reader. When an author establishes a foreign setting through the storytelling itself (and not in awkward, stilted dialogue or blatant, uncrafted listing), a reader’s growing understanding of how the world functions becomes a natural element of the reading experience.

Graphic novels are uniquely suited to establishing a great deal of this kind of detail in the span of a few panels thanks to the power of visual literacy. One of the best examples of worldbuilding done well in the medium of sequential art is Megan Kelso’s Artichoke Tales.

Artichoke Tales

This graphic novel, which took Kelso six years to complete, follows the coming-of-age story of Brigitte Quicksand, an apothecary girl from the South who has fallen in love with a soldier boy from the North. Because she and the boy are from opposite ends of the continent and have very different backgrounds and cultures, they are forced to part ways and say goodbye.

Frustrated by her lack of understanding about why people from the North and South—both of whom have artichoke-looking hair—don’t get along, Brigitte asks her grandmother to tell her about the history of the continent.

Brigitte’s quest for understanding and her desire to reconnect with the boy from the North serves as the vehicle that propels a comprehensive account of this history of the Artichoke people and the consequences of a civil war.

Although the reader goes into Artichoke Tales knowing nothing about the world the Artichoke people live in, by the end of this epic tale, one has a comprehensive understanding of their world—and how it mimics our own.

As a side note, one of my favorite things about Megan Kelso as a cartoonist is that she is unafraid to draw provocative or embarrassing scenes.

Throughout Artichoke Tales, there are illustrations of urination, birth, plenty of sexual encounters, and even of a certain member of royalty experiencing gastric distress.

This inclusion of characters in nude and/or vulnerable positions adds to the realistic effect of good worldbuilding (and good fiction in general). We see these characters in their natural environments, at their best, and at their worst. We get to know them, we recognize ourselves in them, and this is what touches us as readers of good writing.

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Leslie Salas (Photo by Ashley Inguanta)

Leslie Salas writes fiction, nonfiction, screenplays, and comics. She earned her MFA in Creative Writing from the University of Central Florida and attended the University of Denver Publishing Institute. In addition to being an Associate Course Director at Full Sail University, Leslie also serves as an assistant editor for The Florida Review, a graphic nonfiction editorial assistant for Sweet: A Literary Confection, and a regular contributing artist for SmokeLong Quarterly.

Gutter Space #3: Pushing the Boundaries between Comics and Animation in Randall Munroe’s XKCD

21 Wednesday Aug 2013

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Gutter Space #3 by Leslie Salas

Pushing the Boundaries between Comics and Animation

in Randall Munroe’s XKCD

No discussion of comics on the Internet would be complete without taking a look at Randall Munroe’s xkcd. Self-described as “A webcomic of romance, sarcasm, math, and language,” xkcd is known by its substantial following as “the smart stick figure comic” with seemingly simple illustrations conveying more thought-provoking themes, often referring to current events in fields such a s science, literature, Internet culture, and popular culture. One of the most fascinating aspects of xkcd that sets it apart from other webcomics is Munroe’s ability to embrace technology and provide a unique reading experience to his readers that would not be possible in print. To highlight Munroe’s unique use of the webcomics medium in xkcd, this discussion will focus on how Munroe blurs the lines between comics and animation in his 1190th comic, “Time.”

At first glance, “Time” does not seem to be about anything exciting—but that’s because the url only shows the last panel in an epic sequence of continual updates over the course of several months. While at first the changes between the comic panels seemed mundane and simple, eventually the story grew to capture readers’ wonder and challenge their deduction skills as Munroe left hints about the setting of the comic through the two protagonists’ interactions with plants, animals, topography, abandoned residences, and shaky interactions with people from a different culture. Munroe trusts his readers to be smart and he takes no shortcuts with respect to researching and presenting his story.

Perhaps two of the most impressive undertakings of “Time” are the portrayal of a character having difficulty speaking a language and the illustration of the night sky. Munroe’s deliberate blotting-out of words in dialogue serves as a visual representation of garbled speech, giving the reader a similar difficult in understanding as the protagonists may have encountered. The reader only gets bits and pieces of the translator’s speech but learns the gravity of the situation with the help of context clues from the other two protagonists. This kind of visual depiction of an audible struggle would be impossible in a traditional prose medium, but feels natural and makes sense in the realm of this webcomic.

The starfield Munroe draws and animates clearly shows the main characters silhouetted against an unfamiliar Milky Way. The movement of the stars in the background mimics the movement of our own night sky so deliberately that is serves as a hint that time period of the comic is not contemporary. The subtle changes from frame to frame would probably be lost in a traditional print comic, but with each of the panels in “Time” being set on top of one another in a sort of slow animation, the differences appear more obviously and readers gain a distinct sense of movement and the passage of time.

As Munroe describes in a blog post about this epic project:

When the comic first went up, it just showed two people sitting on a beach. Every half hour (and later every hour), a new version of the comic appeared, showing the figures in different positions. … And as Time unfolded, readers gradually figured out that it was a story, set far in the future, about one of the strangest phenomena in our world… All told, I drew 3,099 panels. I animated a starfield, pored over maps and research papers, talked with biologists and botanists, and created a plausible future language for readers to try to decode. … To the intrepid, clever, sometimes crazy readers who followed it the whole way through, watching every pixel change and catching every detail: Thank you. This was for you.

You can watch/read the entire sequence of “Time” at your own pace, view a 40-minute video of the comic, or read reviews by Wired and The Verge. It’s well worth the time.

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Leslie Salas (Photo by Ashley Inguanta)

Leslie Salas writes fiction, nonfiction, screenplays, and comics. She earned her MFA in Creative Writing from the University of Central Florida and attended the University of Denver Publishing Institute. In addition to being an Associate Course Director at Full Sail University, Leslie also serves as an assistant editor for The Florida Review, a graphic nonfiction editorial assistant for Sweet: A Literary Confection, and a regular contributing artist for SmokeLong Quarterly.

Gutter Space #2: Thompson’s Narrative Braiding in Habibi

15 Thursday Aug 2013

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Gutter Space #2 by Leslie Salas

Thompson’s Narrative Braiding in Habibi

In the graphic novel Habibi, Craig Thompson uses the theme of willing- versus forced-sacrifice to effectively braid narratives from the Bible and the Qur’an with the coming of age stories of orphans Dodola and Zam. This juxtaposition of stories and images emphasizes influences the novel’s pacing and tone. To focus more readily on Thompson’s style in Habibi, this discussion is limited to a close reading analysis of pages 46 through 49.

Thompson’s braided narrative structure is perhaps the most obvious in this selection—there are clearly two separate conflicts: 1) Dodola and Zam’s quest to “provide for [them]selves,” and 2) the dilemma of “which son was it?”—Ishmael or Isaac—that Abraham sacrificed when God asked him to sacrifice a son (Thompson 46, 48). While the selection begins and ends with Dodola and Zam, Thompson’s introduction of the sons dilemma as a bedtime story innocuously implants the idea of sacrifice as a potential solution for Dodola and Zam’s plight. The main component of the story of Abraham and his sons is bookended with Dodola’s refrain asking how she and Zam would “provide for ourselves” (Thompson 46, 48). In addition to the story being framed by her question, a single panel amidst Dodola’s journey to meet the caravan and acquire food implies sacrifice with the image of Abraham’s arm raised, knife in hand, over the crouching body of one of his sons. The reader may not yet know that Dodola has chosen to prostitute herself for food and supplies, but Thompson heightens the tension with the simple reminder of Abraham’s plight through the juxtaposition of images.

As Habibi is a graphic novel, notions of images are quite literal and focus on line of sight and effective use of light and dark shading. Thompson makes great use of his images, choosing to invoke patters in the borders of panels to help distinguish between Zam and Dodola’s narrative and Dodola’s Biblical bedtime tale. The panels surrounding the stories from either holy book, the Qur’an or the Bible, are rich and vibrant with intricate detail, all in line with the aesthetic of art as illumination. In terms of panel real estate, almost half of the selection is devoted to the story of Abraham and his sons, and the other half belongs to Dodola and Zam. Thompson’s choice to equally distribute the space on the page to both narratives emphasizes his stylistic preference to the braided narrative and the power of suggestion.

Another strong aspect of the selection is Thompson’s use of repeated images. These images, when repeated with slight changes, can affect perceptions of time or character development. For instance, the camels in caravan progressively become more indistinct and shady (Thompson 48-49). This development creates a sense of mystery and heightens tension at the unknown. In terms of the Zam watching Dodola through the porthole, and interesting transformation occurs in the span of two panels—Zam grows a from screaming infant into concerned adolescent with the repetition of a single panel (Thompson 49). Not only does the reader jump through time with Zam, but his posture and demeanor in a single panel also characterize their situation—Zam and Dodola have survived, and Dodola continues to sacrifice her body so that they both may live.

Speaking again of sacrifice, the repeated images of Ishmael and Issac are particularly effective. While some of these images are repeated throughout the novel, in particular the image of Abraham pressing both of his sons to the altar (Thompson 48), the repetition of the two sons in this section is unique. Although the boys differ in age by thirteen years, they are drawn as equivalents—same age, same height (Thompson 46). Their clothing is similar—although Isaacs may seem a bit finer, and the biggest difference is Ishmael’s thin, dark features as opposed to Isaac’s rounded, fairer ones (Thompson 46). These physical characteristics, as well as their emotional dispositions, are also projected on each of the boys’ respective mothers, further emphasizing their differences. When Ishmael and Isaac appear in the same panel together, it is always Ishmael on the left, and Isaac on the right. While Isaac may be Abraham’s legitimate son and thereby his right hand man, Ishmael is the compliant son. The contrast between these two sons and their character tie into the central theme of sacrifice—voluntary or not.

The juxtaposition and braided narrative not only applies to the religious texts and the lives of Zam and Dodola, but within the texts themselves. The teachings of the Qur’an and the Bible are often presented side by side in what appears to be Thompson’s objective perspective on the nuances of story. This is most evident in the full-page panel depicting the sons of Abraham carrying bundles of firewood to “to the site of the slaughter” (Thompson 47). On the left side of the panel, Ishmael is a “willing participant,” on the left Isaac “was tricked” (Thompson 47). The actual quotes of both Ishmael and Isaac are also provided, along with their location in the Qur’an and Bible, respectively, giving not only Dodola authority as an expert storyteller to Zam, but gives Thompson credibility as the author making a conscious choice to cite the passages themselves.

The study of the differences between the Qur’an and the Bible are culturally pertinent to the current state of affairs between the Western world and the Middle East. While this segment of Habibi does not expand on the radical juxtaposition of first- and third-world living conditions, the excerpt does touch on the power of storytelling, as an oral and written medium, and its influence in society. Dodola begins with a bedtime story about Abraham, Ishmael, and Isaac, but this story grows into a metaphor for their situation, a willing or unwilling sacrifice to “provide for ourselves” (Thompson 46, 48). Thompson’s deliberate use of a braided narrative structure paired with clever use of juxtaposition in images creates compelling pacing and a resonant tone to speak to his theme of sacrifice.

Habibi

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Leslie Salas

Leslie Salas writes fiction, nonfiction, screenplays, and comics. She earned her MFA in Creative Writing from the University of Central Florida and attended the University of Denver Publishing Institute. In addition to being an Associate Course Director at Full Sail University, Leslie also serves as an assistant editor for The Florida Review, a graphic nonfiction editorial assistant for Sweet: A Literary Confection, and a regular contributing artist for SmokeLong Quarterly.

Gutter Space #1: Why Focus on Comics-That-Aren’t-Superhero-Comics?

07 Wednesday Aug 2013

Posted by thedrunkenodyssey in Art, Comic Books, Gutter Space, manga

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Gutter Space #1 by Leslie Salas

Why Focus on Comics-That-Aren’t-Superhero-Comics?

Comics as a medium has a richer and more involved history than many people recognize or remember. Comics analyst Douglas Wolk explains in Reading Comics “the argument about the between relationship between painting and poetry, the generic classical terms for image-making and word-assembling, has been going on for a long time. The earliest people to try and figure it out concluded that painting and poetry were basically different forms of the same thing.”

Reading-Comics

Simonides of Ceos’ formulation poema pictura loquens, picture poema silens aptly illustrates the point that “poetry is a verbal picture; painting is a silent poetry.” (Horace later reduced this to ut pictura poesis, “as is painting, so is poetry.”) This is mostly true in the broad sense that both are ways of representing perception: comics functions as a successful marriage of the visual and lingual.

The medium of comics also goes by many names such as graphic narrative and visual storytelling. In light of this muddled nomenclature, let me clarify that by saying “comics,” which seems to be the most common term, I specifically refer to “sequential art,” as defined by cartoonist Scott McCloud in Understanding Comics as “juxtaposed pictorial and other images in deliberate sequence, intended to convey information and/or to produce an aesthetic response in the viewer.”

UnderstandingComics

Comics started their ascension into literature around World War II in the form of propaganda ads: some sort of illustration with a caption below it. Think of the captioned cartoons in The New Yorker or René Magritte’s famous painting, The Treachery of Images, with the painting of a pipe and the caption, “Ceci n’est pas une pipe.”—“This is not a pipe.”

Margritti this is not a pipe

From there, the art form evolved into gag strips, like those you would see in the newspaper. The strips took a pornographic turn with Tijuana Bibles to help soldiers overseas needing entertainment (or as psy-ops propaganda leaflets to convince reduce soldier’s morale),

Tijuana Bibles

and even mainstream comics still had a political agenda (see the cover for Captain America #1, where Captain America is punching Hitler in the face).

The political content of American comics caused them to be cut off from Europe and Asia (Axis vs. Allied Powers). As a result, two other comic traditions, Japanese manga and Franco-Belgian bandes dessinés, evolved independently. It is only now, several decades after the end of WWII, that all three styles of comics flourish worldwide.

Comics critic Justin R. Hall notes that “comics meets [people’s] sensibilities on a cognitive level.” We live in a visually saturated world, so many people of all ages are naturally drawn to the combination of words and pictures. Reading comics, however, requires a different type of literacy that incorporates not only words, but visuals such as movement between panels, line of sight, and gutter closure.

By reviewing independent comics and webcomics that aren’t superhero comics, my goal is to draw attention to some of the interesting and effective techniques used by cartoonists all over the world. This can help develop visual literacy, identify various narrative structures, provide a dynamic view of cultures, and prompt interdisciplinary study. Plus—it’s interesting and fun!

And if you’re sad that I’m excluding superhero comics, check out Sean Ironman’s column, Heroes Never Rust. He’s got you covered.

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Leslie Salas

Leslie Salas writes fiction, nonfiction, screenplays, and comics. She earned her MFA in Creative Writing from the University of Central Florida and attended the University of Denver Publishing Institute. In addition to being an Associate Course Director at Full Sail University, Leslie also serves as an assistant editor for The Florida Review, a graphic nonfiction editorial assistant for Sweet: A Literary Confection, and a regular contributing artist for SmokeLong Quarterly.

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